I like this one the best. I like the plainness and simplicity. I like the way you take a simple form that reminds me of a nursery rhmye or children's song, and update it with the Jazz reference. It reminds me a bit of what Blake does. It also reminds me a bit of of some of Stevie Smith's work. Try reading some Stevie Smith, you might like her. http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/deeply-morbid/
Thank you very much for taking the time to comment on this. I am glad you like the page and thanks for giving me the link. I love to research other people's work as it helps me improve on my own as I can see how other people express their views and opinions in their voice. Thanks again, Aimz (Founder of: Sitting in the Summer Sun.)
I like this one the best. I like the plainness and simplicity. I like the way you take a simple form that reminds me of a nursery rhmye or children's song, and update it with the Jazz reference. It reminds me a bit of what Blake does. It also reminds me a bit of of some of Stevie Smith's work. Try reading some Stevie Smith, you might like her. http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/deeply-morbid/
ReplyDeleteThank you very much for taking the time to comment on this. I am glad you like the page and thanks for giving me the link. I love to research other people's work as it helps me improve on my own as I can see how other people express their views and opinions in their voice.
ReplyDeleteThanks again,
Aimz
(Founder of: Sitting in the Summer Sun.)